I actually prefer to change chords on open sound (without palmmuting) so your riff is more difficult for me.
Here’s my take (this time it’s not just noisy it’s also a rhytmwise sloopy)) )
As you can hear your record is actually cleaner
Anyway, the point is: with drums it would still sound more or less good. Especially when drummer goes fullmetal
I use a lot of cheats and tricks in my playing. Basically, I am a black belt in Not-Clean-Playing-Jutsu and Mask-That-Noise-With-Drums-Fu )