Thank you @D.Llewelyn, your words are very encouraging!
Added a bridge and a riff at the end. Starts with the double time drums which I need to change, this part need the bass and to double track with the HB. The last riff has an odd time, not sure if I should keep it, there is an open e note I can add at the end to even things out but then it looses something.
Also been struggling with headroom, I think the dynamic range is bit spread-out due to the start with acoustic to meatal riff kinda thing. All amateur hour here 
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