measure 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, and 13 i might do like this probably.
also on measure twelve i would try to start shifting that pattern earlier on as the top 3 strings, on electric probably top 2, i cant remember if the g string is wound , there will be less string slick noise from finger sliding in positions.
also in the gypsy jazz realm they do the chromatic thing with this fret board location measure 14 and 15
measure 18
measure 21
remember most of swybrid is after an upstroke, cause up up sweep pluck, so i try to keep this same logic as i implement the pluck after an upstroke to keep developing the technique. but since this is more of a string skip you don’t have to use this logic, but it works out here for this instance of choice of fingering.
measure 23
measures 19 and 20 together utilizing swybrid or you can just leave it and outside stroke that second measure like you have it written.
you could also just slide into the final note on that arpeggio shape just make sure to really upstroke kinda hard to get the 12th fret e note to ring out. i originally had the initial g note as a downstroke, but I think it might sound better as an upstroke for better rhythmical flow sound maybe.