This is good. I feel like you’re going for it here and pushing it, and we can hear that some things are ever so slightly off, but we don’t know what they are. That’s great. If you spend your entire time in the polite zone you’ll never see these things, and you will have no idea what to work on or fix. If you film yourself from a more down the strings angle, in slow motion, you will be able to take a vague statement like “loses clarity” and attach specifics to it. Do that. Figure out what precisely is happening here that you don’t like, and correct it.
Also, I don’t love the short bursty phrases where you play the one string and then a single note on another string. From what I’ve seen here on the forum, when players practice tiny snippets like this, they often change the movement to something other than the one they’re trying to practice. That’s counterproductive and not helping you learn to make the correct movement habitual. Again, the camera is your friend. Film those takes and the longer ones and you may see that they look different. For now, I’d simply say stick with the slightly longer phrases, they look and sound smoother.
You can’t “neglect a pickslant”. Pickslanting is your picking movement. If it changes, it’s because you are changing it. Think about it. If you use a supinated arm, then to have “no pickslant” you would actually need a diagonal movement of your wrist - just a different one. If you find yourself doing this, this means that out of 360 degrees of possible motion choices, you are actively switching your picking movement the one diagonal wrist movement that happens to line up with the strings. This is not an accident, and it’s not any easier than choosing some other angled motion path like downward pickslanting. They are all just various angled wrist movements. The point of all this practice is to choose one of those paths and make it habitual.