Is this a proper Crosspicking technique?

I’ve never practised any crosspicking and i’m curious is this a good foundation to start on, It seems i’m good at DSX so maybe merging it with Crosspicking will be my ultimate shred superpower.

Hard to tell (i’m not great at analysis), but one test would be to play it faster (fast enoigh to somewhat rule out string hopping. Even if its a bit sloppy, that doesn’t matter, it will give you a sense of its capabilities

Thanks for the advice, i’l try to do it at 140/150bpm and we’ll see what happens