I want you to look at this and make sure I’m not seeing things, or convincing myself of something that’s not there. Can you see what I’m talking about now, or does it still not look to you like what I’m saying it looks like to me? Because it seems obvious to me, even at normal speed, that the motion changes. I may be wrong specifically about how it changes, but it changes.
Re: learning, this is how it works. You do a thing, check it, and if your understanding of it is not correct you change your understanding. Eventually you’ll learn by feel when it is correct. The motion won’t be wiggly or confused any more and will striaghten out and go in a clean back and forth motion path.
Right now I think your speed issues, if indeed they exist, are there because the motion isn’t totally smooth and not following a straight back and forth motion path all the time. Some notes go missing as you try to make certain string changes work out the way you think they should, and the pick misses the string or inserts legato. I would say I think you easily have 20bpm more in this when it’s done perfectly straight line like Brendon does, and the downstrokes are all lined up where they are supposed to be.
This is a fine start. Should’ve filmed this months ago.