Putting lines together - 3NpS - Video

Hello,
for my “Putting lines together - 3NpS” Question here is the video.
Maybe you can give me some suggestion or make some criticism.
Would be very nice, but keep in mind that I´am a beginner in trying to pick fast …
Here is the link to the video on youtube:

Here is the link to my question:

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