Song Y v1 - Calvin W

Hello. I had originally named this song “A Walk In the Park”, but it looks like there is already a song on the forum with that name. Anyway, I was curious what people think:

The only editing I have done to the tracks is adjusting volume levels. Aside from potentially doing more tracking to get better takes, should more editing also be done? I really do not have much experience with mixing or mastering songs, but I am hoping to eventually get an instrumental on a streaming platform, such as Spotify.

Lastly, if you listened to the tune, I would like to thank you for your time.