Your so right about trying to figure out what was intended. Also this lick - the more I listen to the original the more I can here Vai prioritized feel/effect over technical perfection (in this instance)…and I don’t think it could be better - the performance speaks. …there is lot’s of interview material out there about his mindset leading up to this take.
I like your run (also your hand sync is really tight - how long did it take you to feel like your hand sync was reliable?). There are a lot of 3nps phrases (?cells, ?units) that I have under my fingers but never put them together for this. Thanks so much for posting. I think I will add one chromatic note to this at the end on the high E string - F# G G# A A (bend to B). I’m not sure if Vai does this but I just feel it on my own.