Awesome Jacklr! Yes there is all kinds of amazing stuff in here with unusual phrasing.
The section I have been working on is in your transcription measures 23-25. You have done a great job on the timing - there are little variations in there that you have got just right.
To my ear in this section there are two ghost notes - and I can actually only hear one - and so I play that one in my version but leave the other one out. Here are the two notes in brackets.
E -------------------17–19–21–19-(17)---------19–17---------------------17------------
B --17–19–21------------------------------21----------------21–19–21-----------21–19–17
G -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
D -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
E -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
E----------------17–19–21–19–17--------19–17--------------------17------------------------
B --19–21-------------------------------21-------------(21)—19–21----------21–19–17-----
G -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
D -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
E ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The second one I don’t play.
I also pick all the notes. I just haven’t been able to find a way to get the Yngwie rules to work in this section. It is played very fast and very cleanly and also you have to find a way to make it sound like Yngwie from a phrasing point of view. I’m getting closer to a version I am happy with and will post when it is good enough.
One of my challenges has been that Yngwie’s top speed is much faster than mine - so in this run I am stretched to my absolute limits to reach the speed - but he can go faster yet.
Thanks for the transcriptions!