If instead you want to use the Technique Critique section of the Forum (also known as “Forum TC”), where you can get feedback from the whole community, keep reading!
Mike’s core motion is USX as you have no doubt noticed. We can quibble about how your form is different than Mike’s but that’s looking too closely at the small picture at this step.
What’s more important is that the core motion itself is fast and feels easy. Your platform Gypsy-style USX video looks quite nice, includes some complex alternate and sweep combinations, and is not “sloppy” at all. It’s just not super speedy.
You have a membership, so I’d make a critique in your account, rather than here on the forum. We’re happy to take a look at your motion fundamentals!