Cool your going to work towards doing lesson material here. I went through it with my guitar in my hand…so these are initial impressions.
For presentation style I would say try to frame the shot…better…either guitar and hands or include your full guitar/upper body/head. Try to hang a sheet in the background to reduce distractions…or visual style of your choice. A little more light that aims to reduce shadows.
As for the lesson - although it was simple concepts it came across as ‘too much too fast’ in terms of pace. The title suggests it will be about symmetric shapes for shred (i.e. majority left hand focus) however the bulk of the lesson (after the initial shape and octave shift) was picking patterns to use with those shapes…I would say stick with one concept…and use one or two picking patterns to demonstrate the use of the shape (perhaps one for USX and one for DSX). A separate lesson on single escape picking patterns that connect 3nps shifts would be awesome.
When presenting the picking patterns - play through it slowly (steady pace and completely), then fast and stay in the same octave. Think in terms of a ‘forward chaining’ style of putting the material out there…slow in one octave…then fast in one octave…then next octave slow…then connect octaves slow…then fast two octaves for inspiration. You generally did that here but it came across a little disjointed and too fast.
For speech - just try to project, be intentional. Don’t let words or sentances trail off.
I hope this is the feedback you were looking for. I think it’s great if CtC is looking at moving to add ‘in house’ lesson material. Cheers.